Thursday, October 14, 2010

Response to Brian's Journal Week 10

Brain,

Once again you show your knack for strange and abstract language pairings (blackstrap afternoon and bird shaped days for instance).You do a nice job here of leading the reader and teasing them with further possible details, yet you seem to divulge these details while being withholding (I hope that makes sense). I noticed a few instances where your words appeared as perhaps a little sing-songish and wonder if this is a bit of bleed over from your experience as a musician. Either way, nice stuff.

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