Brain,
Once again you show your knack for strange and abstract language pairings (blackstrap afternoon and bird shaped days for instance).You do a nice job here of leading the reader and teasing them with further possible details, yet you seem to divulge these details while being withholding (I hope that makes sense). I noticed a few instances where your words appeared as perhaps a little sing-songish and wonder if this is a bit of bleed over from your experience as a musician. Either way, nice stuff.
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